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Stop

Stop, shadow of my elusive good,
image of the spell I love most,
beautiful illusion for whom I die happily,
sweet fiction for whom I live painfully.
If my chest serves as an obedient steel to the magnet of your attractive graces,
why do you flatter me,
if you are to mock me then, fugitive?
But you cannot boast, satisfied
that your tyranny triumphs over me;
for although you have mocked the tight bond
that encircled your fantastic form,
it matters little to mock arms and chest
if my fantasy creates a prison for you.
Published by tsuma-ingrid
11 months ago
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Catwomanmeows
Catwomanmeows 11 months ago
words... read by candlelight... as sonic screams pierce the endless night...
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sapholover
sapholover 11 months ago
Indeed, it is painful to feel trapped in a chimera whose love one desires ardently. The semantic chain of the first four verses describes the object of the poet’s romantic desire as a shadow, an image, an illusion, a fiction. In short, all these qualifiers place us in the unreal, of evanescence and consequently of elusiveness. However, far from letting down by the elusive and fugitive character of this lover who seems to make fun of her, our Ingrid uses a subterfuge at least paradoxical to bring her back to her and hold him. Enclose this almost phantasmal presence within one’s own fantasy. So with another illusion. It’s called fighting fire with fire! Even if she remains the master of her cell, does not the poet reveal a failure? For, from the beginning to the end of the poem, we remain in the elusive, in the fantasmatic illusion. It is sometimes painful not to be able to physically hug the one we love in our arms. At least fantasy can be a palliative. Many people are struggling with the sometimes unforgiving laws of love. And everyone does what they can to get through this ordeal. Thanks to her immense poetic talent, our Ingrid does it wonderfully.
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Catwomanmeows
Catwomanmeows 11 months ago
The clouds obscure the stars.  My eyes need no light.  I retract my claws and... silently follow my masked stranger, who turns, suddenly, and shows me, a piece of paper... Stop!
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tsuma-ingrid
tsuma-ingrid Publisher 11 months ago
You are very kind. You give me strength to continue writing.
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